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[CARnage]

this is like if putt-putt one day decided to go on a horrific rampage across the city, pretty good stuff here

Luke-Toons responds:

Im honored

[Squargon Adventures 0.25]

It's pretty alright, though I'd say maybe shorten the length of the winning animation (maybe shorten it to the length of the cash bag animation) because it seems like the character dances the whole entire half of the song that plays, and it might get exhausting having to sit through it each time you beat a boss. And also I'd recommend having it so that an enemy completely disappears when you defeat it in a room, that way the player doesn't cheat by coming back to the same room and defeating it over and over.

Flash4lyfe responds:

Well yeah, Sorry for that long Win animation , but about the enemies despawning, i don't think it's possible on scratch however, and even It is, i don't want to mess with the code however,

[Pouchie The Cat | Alpha 0.2.0]

This is gonna be a long one, but I've got a few pointers that may help you out.
While I do like the idea of a 1930's black and white cartoon platformer, I feel like the juxtaposition of the acoustic sounding instruments from the map/level start screen and the techno-sounding music that plays during the level totally threw me off the first time I played it. I'd recommend changing it to fit the classic cartoon aesthetic you're going for. I also feel like the camera should be a bit closer to Pouchie, that way you have more room to see what's up ahead of you, like the pits, and the enemies. I feel like he's too far to the right when I'm moving, and it makes it harder to see what's coming. And I'm not 100% sure, but I think what the previous feedback meant by "floaty" might refer to the collision between the cat and the ground, just from playing it myself, it's easy to slip off the platform and fall off. I would tweak the collision detection a bit, like having the level tiles be a solid square, that way the round edges doesn't cause the cat to fall off, or tweak how much the character slides after landing from a jump or stopping. Overall though, this game has some good potential. Keep it up!

ThatElfNerd responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I definitely intend to change up the music. I've only been using free stuff I found on the internet, as well as testing out some things in Bandlab (A knock-off of GarageBand). When it comes to Pouchie slipping off the edge, all the tilemap collision boxes are fully square, which means that the problem would have more to do with the fact that Pouchie's collision box is pill-shaped. I could always change that, but changing to a rectangle collision shape could also be problematic, as he'd be easier to hit in the corners. For now though, I'll see what can be done for him to stop sliding as much.

[Save Sacky 2]

how are you supposed to react on time?
please make the button slower next time, because it goes by way too fast to react.

LilNutter responds:

Don't worry! I'll make it a tab bit slower to make it easier. But this is a Fast Click game, So it is supposed to be quick

[Siklum Valley]

It's a cool game, but I think you should add more levels.

DOFAT-Game responds:

I was To lazy to Add more level,SORY man!